Last summer of innocence

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I think this poem has alot of different characteristics. The poem is very descriptive but its hard to completely 100% understand, im not the type of person to really read poetry, so i have a hard time analyzing the poem and the meaning of the poem.

I like the fact he describes what he’d wear on a summer day while with his friends and etc. Like he said he’d play football, look at different girls, and etc. One of my favorite quotes was “Waves all day, white beater and our best basketball shorts, the flyest shoes.”

I also like when he says “cutting heads round the corner, cutting eyes at the mother of girls i pretend to praise. I showed off for girls but stared at my stupid bony crew.”

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My reaction towards Smith’s reading was very powerful. The way he says he recites his poem is so blunt and moving, it gives me goosebumps. He is also entertaining so it makes it easier for me to like the poem. He reads with so much passion and not a lot of people do that, I admire it. I like how he communicates with his audience, it like they have been friends. His not shy, he lets his personality out. I could listen to him read the whole book with no complaints. He doesn’t like that the fact that he has HIV hold him back. Some people in his position  don’t have the courage to do that.

You can really feel the pain and the passion coming through his reading. If I was one of the audiences I would really have hype this man up. His great he really had me feeling him. His sassy attitude, had me yelling “yaaaasssssssss”. I would not mind being his friend. I like the way he changes his tone, to catch your attention and also to entertain the audience.

The way his poems are written is so different from the way he recites his poems.  His poems are serious and the way he ways communicating with his audience is much different. I am just so amazed by the way he presents his work and that takes passion and he has it. He is not afraid to show who he is in is performances and he says it as it is and I like that.

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I never cared for poetry, but for some reason Danez Smiths poems have interested me. I read the poem “recklessly” and it took me a few times to read and actually fully understand what he was trying to say, even though i am not fully sure i get what he is saying. Smiths was mentioning a boy a lot and i think he is talking about his sexuality or about being in love with a boy or more like a love story. I think the boy was confusing Smith but he did not care. The tone makes me feel he is desperate about something or like worrisome. What i liked about this poem also was that in a way it had me on the edge of my seat, i did not know or expect what he was going to say next or what he meant about everything until i digested it and went back to the beginning. I was not at all disappointed by this poem and i look forwards into reading more by him, he is very unique and it has a very big impact on how he writes because you can almost feel how he feels through his word which is extremely powerful. https://vinylpoetryandprose.com/2017/09/danez-smith/

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Danez Smith. The author of “ Don’t Call Us Dead” to summarize the book I feel like he had no doubts when making this book. He didn’t care what anyone thought of him, he had no shame in his writing.  After finding out that he was HIV positive I’m pretty sure he thought his life was over. After locking eyes with death he knew he had to change his life around .In one of his poems “ Dear White America” he talks about police brutality against black men which is a really big issue in america right now. I feel like he puts his voice in his writing  and in reality for many black americans. Even though he doesn’t actually say that he’s talking about police brutality, he gives little hits and leaves the reader hanging like “ whats next” . He also calls the folks who died his “ brothers and sisters”. He also talks about blck women and writes a poem about another really big issue that makes african american or even any women of color feel less than.

Even though I dont know him personally I feel like I’ve known this man for years. Also everything he talking about ( mostly about me being black ) I can relate to. People think that me being light skin, gives me more opportunities life but it doenst. When I was younger, in about 1st or second grade, I would get bullied about how light I was from the rest of the class. They would call me “light bright” or “ high yella”. I struggled with my complexion all throu high school, laughing and smiling at the jokes but deep down I would ask why? Why me ? And Im not telling you this because I want you to feel bad for me, Im telling you this because people have feelings. They may not show you at the moment but … trust me they feel it. Now that I look at it I see that they were just young dumb and ignorant .

Over all I think that the book  wants the reader to see what a day in the life of a black, homosexual, HIV ,MAN in america feels like. And I capitalize MAN because he has the balls to actually say what he feels after years of torture and endless fighting to live a happy life.It also lets the reader know that they are  not alone, that they are not the only person who has experienced something horrible in their life. He wants people to wake up and not smell the roses, but to wake up and realize that this is real life. That people are dying everyday for a change.

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The book “DON’T CALL US DEAD” and the reading from Danez Smith was a very passionate. The title of the book and the picture on the book cover makes the poems in it all make since. Basically the different poems are putting a shining light on racism and how it is for a African American in the United States. “history is what it is. it know what it did” A very profound quote from the author basically saying we know the history but the history will never change it will always be the same no matter how u twist it. Maybe there’s a more deeper meaning where the author is hinting at we should move on from the past knowing that we can never change what has happened.

As the author Danez Smith reads some of these poems in the online reading he is very passionate and ecstatic while reading. It’s almost as he’s acting some of these poems out. In a way you can imagine how these poems can happen in everyday life from the way he’s reading them. For some reason when I think of somebody reading different poems I think of somebody nonchalantly reading a poem but this was the complete opposite. In fact the energy he is reading these poems with almost grabs your attention even if you don’t want to pay attention to what he has to say.

Yes these poems could be looked at as very controversial but these same arguments that the author makes in these poems are arguments that people have everyday. The author gives an inside glimpse on not only how his life is but a bunch of other people as well. The author is speaking up for people who are going through the same thing he has and is going through that’s why these poems will connect well with lots of people. I like the author is not scared to voice his opinion and while reading these poems he is very animated. To me that shows that he is confident in what he is saying and having no fears of what somebody else might have to say about it.

Don’t Call Us Dead- Reaction

Poetry and I have never gotten along. I have yet to acquire a taste for it. After being assigned to read Danez Smith’s “Don’t Call us Dead”, I was yawning before I even opened it. I expected it to be a rather boring collection of poetry. However, I was in for an pleasant surprise.

Smith’s tone can be heard throughout every single poem. It’s different, it varies. I can almost hear him reading these out loud! So instead of wondering how he’d sound like reading them, I actually listened to the poems being read out loud.

I loved it so much! Smith does a wonderful job taking the “boring” stereotype of poetry that I have built up in my head. He turns his sorrow, anger, and resentment into an almost melody and I wish every poem had a video to go along with it. I think this could really help me to connect better.

I appreciate his raw honesty. He doesn’t hold back at all! He writes the way he thinks, which I think is great! You don’t get a lot of genuineness from people nowadays. Overall, I’d say reading this was an enjoyable experience that I did not expect!

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Zachery Ali-Yallah

Dr. Perry

English 1102

Introducing Zachery Ali-Yallah

January 27, 2019

Zachery Ali-Yallah

Early Life

Hello my name is Zachery Ali-Yallah. I was born in DeKalb county Georgia. My parents lived in Saudi Arabia at the time of my birth so my mom and I travelled to Saudi Arabia soon after birth to join my dad. We lived in Saudi Arabia for about 2 years before returning to Covington, Georgia. I attended Cousins Middle School where I played basketball. I graduated high school in 2018 from Salem High School. I now attend Georgia State University, Perimeter campus.  I am looking to transfer after I finish my 2 years at this school. I am majoring in journalism here at Georgia State Perimeter. My goal is to graduate from a four year college in 2022 and either join the Air Force or continue to graduate school.

Family

My father is from Ghana, West Africa. Although I have never visited Ghana, I look forward to going there one day. My mother is from Decatur, Georgia hence our attachment to Georgia. My father has a Ph.D. in Computer Science so I want to be like him one day although I do not necessarily like computers beyond just using them for basic things like surfing the web or playing games. I am from a very educated family. My older sister is in Law School. My sister who comes after me is taking college classes in 11th grade. My mom has a nursing degree. I have a lot to look up to education wise.

Personal interest

In my spare time I am usually either playing basketball or watching basketball. I have been playing basketball since elementary school so it is something I’ve always loved to do. In my freshman year of high school, I played varsity basketball but sadly broke my ankle which kept me out for the rest of the season. When I returned in my second year I broke my pinky finger. I was never able to fully recover and get back to full strength. I still enjoy playing basketball even after all the injuries I had. My favorite player to watch in the NBA is LeBron James and whatever team he is on. I support whatever team he is on because I like the player and not the team necessarily. If I am not playing basketball or watching it, then I am usually at my part-time job or hanging with my family. ffffffffff

About me

My name is Jelysa Edwards and I am Jamaican. Both my parents are from Jamaican and we try to visit every year. I like to visit and help my family anytime we get an opportunity to go. Not only do i like to go there to see my family but the food there is more than delicious.

I’ve played tennis since the 7th grade and that is my favorite sport. I’ve played soccer, basketball, and volleyball but tennis is my favorite so that’s what I kept doing. I played tennis all of high school and been in 3 championship games. I decided not to play in college to focus more on my goals i wasn’t really interested in keeping up with it.

My major is psychology. I plan on using my psychology degree to obtain a marketing/ advertising job. I’m really interested with study human behavior and development which could help me in sales by understanding how the human brain works in order to help grow business. If my major were to change i would major in a marketing degree and minor in psychology.